holy crap - this is awesome !!!! I didn't read it all (duuuh... ), just the fragments where happened a lot...
when I saw the picture, with that guy crawling through such small hole in solid rock, I couldn't believe it.
but when I reached the part with Joe and the last visit in the cave... s***, many horror films or books are just lame compared to this
I just have to add, that when I finished reading this, it was 00:05 AM and my room was lit only by my monitor (well... now it's 00:12 and my room is still dark
)... nice atmosphere for reading such stories, eh?