I DIDN'T want to show what YOU think is "divine" or a "Divinity". I wanted to show what I think it could be in this special continent.
Uhm. It isn't a question of what it is like to be divine. It stands to reason that a being that is ageless, and has the powers of a diety, has a rather different perspective on things. Just the mere fact that this diety has a desire to be worshipped, should mean something.
What exactely do these dieties of you do, anyways? Why are they worshipped? There is nothing about the motivation of the Adorant in the story. He worships this diety, because she is a diety. Well, that's rather two-dimensional. There's no real motivation.
They don't have "divine powers" as you traditionally might know or expect, they are immortal, but apart from that they can be weak, they can forget, they have memories, god ones and bad ones.
Yes, rather the same as with the dieties of the Greek pantheon. However, even though these Gods are flawed, they certainly don't seem childish. Vain, vindictive, and irrational, yes. But certainly not ignorant of their own powers. You say they are immortal, then it is reasonable to expect that in all these years they've developed intelligence and wisdom, right?
