Alrik...
An interesting idea, but I think giving your characters names would have helped.
The idea that The Adorant could really be anyone (Which I presume is the reason he is not named) is defeated by the Goddess (Who - as one of many - should also be named, at least by her worshippers, to avoid confusion) who singles him out as being a very special person in her eyes.
A named character is also far easier for the reader to identify with, and as you are not actually trying for an air of mystery here there is no reason
not to give a name.
Just a few thoughts <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif" alt="" />
