You'll have to point out som specific spots, because I've proofread it a million times.
There're simply too many to put in a public post; I'm not you beta-reader, after all. Some examples, though--
Mark says catching the ball and throwing on the run.
Mark says
, catching the ball...
"That doesn't make you German. That makes you Aryan," She tells him with a smile.
"That doesn't make you German. That makes you Aryan,"
she tells him with a smile.
