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There're simply too many to put in a public post; I'm not you beta-reader, after all. Some examples, though--


I know you aren't my beta reader. I just meant a few examples to give me an idea of what I was doing wrong. Ihe things you poined out a just a few things I overlooked.

"I've never been a lover, I've always been a fighter. It's high time I fight for love instead of the usual crap reasons I fight for, like my own pride" -- A wise guy