Janggut said:
@ winterfox -> don't u dare back out of the forum now. i haven't finish studying your character.
Don't worry; there's a reason I constantly preach "grow skin!" I can take as much as I dish out. <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/winkwink.gif" alt="" />
Kiya said:
1.: where is your main impact? Words or tone? Why? Because a flaw in the eye of one gamer, might be fun for the other. Sentences used in the form of statements, instead of stating clearly the own subjective point of view tend to be taken as an insult or patronage, thus triggering emotions instead of brains. (Referring to your remarks in brackets)
There are things that are not subjective, however. Take, for instance, a reviewer on FF.net. I've seen many cases where a reviewer -- not myself, mind you -- expresses, very gently and politely, that the author's grammar/punctuation needs serious work. What do the author's rabid fans do? Jump on the poor reviewer and scream expletives.
Barta said:
About the novella, i did not have time to read it for the moment but i enjoy very much the dialogs written by Rhianna in Beyond divinity.
She wrote the dialogue in the game, as well?
Oh.Incidentally, I've found a journal that's a fair treasure trove of writing advice:
Arin i Asolde.
