I've just finished the first part of a short horror story I'm writing. I'd like to post the link here to get any views on it. This would be my first attempt at something like this since my school days (over 15 years ago)!
Note: rating for this story is 15's <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/evilgrin1.gif" alt="" />
The Creeping Black 
