kiya, that's wonderful! u must've put so much thought on the subject matter. i hope larians will think of this. <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/up.gif" alt="" />

anyway, feedback:

character interaction is nice! it's almost like one game that i knew but forgot the name. i think it's an adventure or horror/survival game. with the two separated initially, the gameplay can be quite smooth without the other stumbling on another's feet & players can learn the game mechanics slowly & get to be exposed with as many skills as possible without the choices being overwhelming.

though your plot suggests more linearity than DD or BD, i think it will make the story tight & cohesive. i think this style will be script-heavy.

anyway, i would like to see farmers forming their own guild to protect their interests; health of crops, prices on crops, etc. after all, rivellon is no longer a poor man's quarter as there's no more plague to hold that place back & with the farmers, the place has elevated to verdistis level back in DD timeline while verdistis is on the verge of bankcrupcy due to corruption & stuff.

oh well, just my ideas. <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/biggrin.gif" alt="" />

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