Love is given joyfully, and is a constant bowing to the other.
is there a way to translate by
Love is a joyful gift (sounds english?), and is a constant bowing to the other
?
that will be more reflecting the german rythme.
err... hmm... traduttore/traditore... (and yep my italian is as bad as my german <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/shame.gif" alt="" />) ... hmm translator/traitor