not sure about how Seth started off (i hope he's still interested in this), but u can always start off mysteriously. but of course u will need to start somewhere as in place & when (before the tectonic shift or after).
since u have an idea on where to start, u know who to look for. <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/winkwink.gif" alt="" /> have fun. <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/up.gif" alt="" />
edit: Lews, i love the start of your story. it's really mysterious & it has details though there are some held back to make readers hungry for more. very good. <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/up.gif" alt="" /> business man, eh? <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/winkwink.gif" alt="" />