Ok since the days of my youth (whatever that means Im only 23) I have been working on writing a goooood fantasy story, I literally started in my freshman year of High School..sooo 8-9 years ago...ok maybe I am getting old...anyway I have something that I would like feeback on, good feedback not just DUDE UR AWSOM and crap like that <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/evilgrin1.gif" alt="" />
The link to the story!
http://personal.stthomas.edu/jebeins/BoP.doc 
