Looks nice. Do you hire people ? <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/winkwink.gif" alt="" />
There's only two things :
- Well I guess everybody knows what's "I.T.", but I think you should expand it at least once somewhere - just for the customers unfamiliar with I.T. <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/winkwink.gif" alt="" />
- I think this sentence is a bit too long. Could you make it into two sentences, maybe ? And try not to use "poor" twice ?
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A Friend of Mine I.T. is duty bound to eradicate poor services providers which damage the I.T. Support industry’s market through gross neglect and poor business ethics.
Apart from that, the sentence is quite good, imho <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif" alt="" />
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