Just to add. Orangutan=troll
I disagree in that while Winterfox was disagreeable he/she made more concice logical points. Some of which I even agreed with. This guy's just an idiot. He dresses insults up in long sentances (probably grammar/spell-checked by word) but that disguises nothing. They're just rude and quite frankly, pointless.
One word-constructive criticism. Something I would give to the poetry if I actually knew anything about it. Also if I had the time.
One last point: Free-form poetry (for want of a better term) is a valid expression. In fact its pretty much what I prefer to read. The repetition of certain words, buzz or not, is sometimes necessary to emphasise a point.
Rhyme and meter is something you learn in school. Some believe there is actually more to poetry (or anything else) after you leave the strict doctorines of the classroom.
Also monkey-boy, try writing in German.
Sorry to provoke, but many of you know what I'm like.... <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif" alt="" />
