I particularly liked the counterpoint of imagery, contrasting the necessity of action with the internalized emotions that any civilized person would inevitably experience as a result of such an encounter. Please continue the genre in situ per your present eloquent style. Brava!
And, Bravo for all. I'm really enjoying this story! <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/up.gif" alt="" /> <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/up.gif" alt="" />
