I'm working on a short comic strip story which I hope to get published - I'm basically looking for some constructive criticism, and as I trust the people here I think I could receive some useful feedback. What works, what doesn't.

Anyway if you have a moment why not take a look.

Wait a min for the pdf to download - and you may need to copy/paste the link also rather than click.

The Docks - Sample

If link doesn't work:

http://www.freewebs.com/plowking/TheDocks_sample_WIP.pdf

Thanks
G