Though, this part: "The Dragon Elves are a cross-breed, an artificially engineered race that combines the Dragons strength and cunning with the Elf’s almost feline spryness."
Erm, is it American or British English you're using? If American English, that's okay but if British English, erm...
We use British English; what's wrong with the sentence?
Ach, it should read like this:
The Dragon Elves are a cross-breed, an artificially engineered race that combines the Dragon’s strength and cunning with the Elf’s almost feline spryness. Designed to be the immovable guard of Sentinel Island - the Dragon Isle - these creatures…
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