"But all the while the true enemy – the Black Ring – still festers beneath the surface, ready for its next move, poised to strike. For their leader Damian tirelessly plots silent schemes with utterly malign intent."
should be "ready for its' move". That's under the "History" section, I think?
Features section:
Ego Draconis gives you a wide range of moral choices when deciding on how to act on quest objectives.
"when deciding how to act on" would be good or even this: "when acting on quest objectives".
