I don´t have anything positive to say recently, do I? Well, here I go. Again.
The ground on the lower right side is too bright green, looking more primitive graphics-wise than is really the case.
The lettering is way too large, the yellow too harsh. It so completely dominates the picture that it's kind of difficult to notice anything else. It especially weighs heavily on the Dragon itself, making it a background element on par with the fields.
I'm not saying DRAGON COMMANDER should blend in and become invisible, but... do the bright yellow letters with the straight lines really suggest "magitek fantasy" to you?
I mean, let's say you want to use this logo to get people to the Facebook page. What reason are you giving the uninformed layperson to go there? Well, the Dragon with the jetpack, obviously. But it's hard to see at a casual glance that I'm actually looking at a Dragon with a jetpack. The only thing a casual glance gives me is that big ugly title so why should I care to look a little deeper?
I'm not sure I'm making sense here and I don't mean to be a hater or anything, but this image isn't doing it for me. Behind the letters, if I really try, I can just make out an image of a Dragon flying free with the sky above and the ground below, heading towards the sunrise (or possible a city in the mid-right there), but a logo shouldn't have to make me try.
I'm suriously, suriously hoping this is sarcasm. Plese say this sarcasm?
