Sailor at x:242 y:-6 (or any sailor on docks) Response (#2) to: 5. Can you tell me about the attacks upon the harbour. "That burnng ship.." > "That burning ship..." Also, "armageddon" > "Armageddon" Consider changing "harbour" (British spelling) to "harbor"
ZixZax x:139 y:51 "Follow me the observatory post haste." > "Follow me to the observatory post haste."
Pablo x:253 y:30 Response to 5. Tell me about the Legion. "Thanks to the legion there's hasn't been..." > "Thanks to the legion there hasn't been..." Also, "Legion" capitalized or lowercase throughout?
Cecil x:742 y:203 "Yes, Vicotoria's come a long way" (both name spelling and possessive) > "Yes, Victoria has come a long way."
Jahan "JoinParty" > "Join Party"
EDIT: Septimus x:317 y:185 "And the Cysaelians..." > "And the Cysealians..." "...with such horros haunting..." > "...with such horrors haunting..."
