Originally Posted by Hiver
Originally Posted by Stabbey

There's no call for that kind of attitude. It's just an example for reference. Yes, Larian could certainly write it better, but there's no need to be rude about it

There is nothing "rude" in calling something badly written - badly written Stabbs.
But there is something rude in calling things that are not rude - rude.

That example you quoted is very badly written and intentionally so, in order to create a presumed false excuse for the current form of the quest remaining the same, despite how illogical it is.

The "but i didnt mind it!" or "but i like it" has nothing to do with internal coherence and logic of something written.


OR.. it's simply a harmless example that's not secretly trying to do anything beyond just paraphrasing.

Originally Posted by Gyson

1) "Who are you?"
2) "About your sheep.."
3) "About the money.."
4) "Later, gator."



..vs..

[Linked Image]

If you felt like there was a hidden agenda in "Later, gator." beyond making you chuckle, you may have missed the point.

I guess I should have typed..

1) "I can't put my finger on it but there is a hint of fascination in the air surrounding you. Please, fair Bertia, tell me more about yourself."
2) "I can see you're distraught and I hate to bring up such a tender topic, but might we discuss your stolen sheep some more?"
3) "What does it have in its pockets, precious?"
4) "I must beg your pardon a thousand times, for as much as I would love to stay and chat my duties require that I depart your company."

Oh, dang it.. I screwed it up again.