Any combat which lasts longer than 4 rounds makes Head Start a bad thing - even worse if you take Glass Cannon. Bump it up to +4 and I think it's a good, solid talent.

Fashion Plate is good for characters who spread their stats out, which I think is good.

suggestions:

Scout
increases Sight and Hearing by 4

Venomous Strikes
(req rank 3 Scoundrel)
Doubles elemental damage from weapons

Find Weakness
Each point of Perception allows you to ignore 1.5% of the enemy's armor rating.

Cozy
(req rank 1 Pyro)
Heal 5% of your max HP every turn, while Warm

Fish out of Water
(req rank 1 Hydro)
gives +1 recovery AP while wet and -1 recovery AP while warm or burning

Light Touch
reduces strength by 1, but increases lockpicking and pickpocketing by 1 each.