In this latest update, I changed the Tutorial Dungeon pressure plate so that it requires 0.5 weight to trigger rather than its previous 50 weight. I have also changed the Character Creation customize camera so that it properly focuses on Player 1 (there might be some stuttering as it transitions though).
Version 3 with these changes is here-
http://www.mediafire.com/download/0qdyoo5ridanhw2/JourneyoftheLoneWolfV3.zipI'm still not quite sure what's causing the missing dialog code-wise.