You should tell the developers to move the "Endorsements" and "Who we are" section to after the stuff talking about what the game actually is. Endorsements and bios don't convince people to buy games, talking about the game does, so move that up top.

They are also missing descriptions for some of the tier rewards.

EDIT: I was not really that impressed. They didn't say all that much about what made this game special, and what they did say sounded pretty much like what a lot of other games already have done.

Last edited by Stabbey; 12/03/15 03:27 PM. Reason: reaction