@LightningYu
Interesting ideas about the weapons on the ship. But I think they should cut it out. On the other hand it makes more sense in Fort Joy for me, where all the time a Sourcerer can be transformed into a Monster and then it would be good, if the prisoners can defend themselves with their lacking weaponry (being cannonfodder and all that).
Something else: is it just me or does Bishop Alexandars read a bit more remorseful than in the first version of the Alpha? It's just one ellipsia, but it makes a difference for me. And "Beast" reads like the smart guy of the group, if he can reckon how long it will take to Fort Joy.
Edit: As for the "Source is magic" - discussion: I think Source is the glue of creation and is in EVERYONE, while magic is something, that you can learn, like science.
But maybe it is something genetic, since the first Mages were children of the goddess of magic, if I remember it correctly. But maybe the first mages taught Rivellon magic? It was a long time ago, since I read that part of the lore.
Last edited by Zelon; 31/05/17 07:24 PM.
