Could you inform me of which points or individual examples/explanations seem underdeveloped? (A PM or post is fine.)

I tried to remain as brief as possible with each separate issue, but if that's getting in the way of understanding them then perhaps some alterations can be made to better illustrate them.

The Flaws of Divinity: Original Sin II: A list of observations of the game's shortcomings for the community.
Found HERE.