I've made the following changes to the document:
- Reworded the Risk Management Major Issue and split it into two parts.
- Adjusted some of the harsher language ('a joke', 'absolutely terrible', etc) according to community feedback.
- Minor spelling/format/grammar fixes
I'm glad to hear so many people are finding my observations interesting or are taking these points and running with them!
I look forward to the community's future efforts and how D:OS2 will continue to grow after its launch; knowing that I might've helped spur the right changes onwards has made this whole idea worthwhile.
