Could you inform me of which points or individual examples/explanations seem underdeveloped? (A PM or post is fine.)
I tried to remain as brief as possible with each separate issue, but if that's getting in the way of understanding them then perhaps some alterations can be made to better illustrate them.
Being brief is the issue, lot of them are just headlines and one paragraph. I'd have to write an essay on everything wrong with it, before I could even begin to discuss what was being agreed on.
The first one boils down to "the system isn't the old one" there's no indication of what you want or why it'd be better.
It sounds like you want the opportunity to have more rounds than others, which sounds really bad and dumb.
