*whisper whisper* If you want to see how bad it gets, do a Edit -> Find (on this page) on that story. Look for "kiss", perhaps. Read through each sex scene, and you'll discover that they are all the same ("Link's heavenly body", "my enchanted body", "his infatuated body" (this elicits "WTF?!" from many. Infatuated? Body?), "tiger-like cries", to name but a few). I mean, there's bad pr0n and then there's bad porn.
