I agree on both counts: it is very well written and I was similarly impressed with particular bits, but there does seem to be a few cases where the dialogue has a somewhat estranged relationship with what you're seeing, both in actions and appearance. I guess it's one of those areas where things can sometimes be difficult to closely synchronise when there's different people (or even teams) working on the respective bits though there's a few areas of incongruity that would benefit from a bit of attention. Like Roost and his baby-soft skin which has apparently never seen anything harsher than the finest silks.
