Layzel has a superiority complex which irks me. I don't mind selfish, or hell, even sadistic characters, but since there's no other choice as a frontline, you kinda have to roll with her unless you're a fighter yourself. Also, for an uber-soldier as she describes herself, it's pretty pathetic to get caught and trapped by two greenhorn tieflings. I would honestly re-write that scenario to something more believable or in-line with her combat experience. Other than that, she's fine as a character - if she has the capacity to evolve and become more humble along the way, it would be perfect.
Shadowheart. The name is obviously imbecilic, not even 12 year old me would consider this "cool". Like said, she is an "evil" cleric but she's just mostly selfish and reserved, which is fine for a neutral character. I am not sure how feasable it is to change her name now (probably a very slim chance, as it would require re-recording a lot of dialogues) but I sense there could be a lot of room for growth once and if she starts opening up.
Astorian gave me a creepy vibe from the start, not because he's a vampire, but like, his whole demeanour is just out of place (given the circumstances) and wierd, plus my char is a rogue so no need for two. No experience, instantly delegated to the camp.
Gale - kinda boring to be honest. His comments are cringy but seems like a good guy.
Wyll - the cool Gale. He has one eye, a pact with a demon and is altruistic/repentent in a believable way. His interaction with the goblins is interesting, although kind of an unbelievable coincidence.
