I don't understand what your point is.
If it's about the writing being bad, then I don't agree. I personally really like the writing(aside from Shadowheart), I think it flows well for a single-player RPG, especially compared to other single-player RPGs(Dragon Quest, Final Fantasy, Dragon Age, Mass Effect) it starts off strong and fun for me.
I don't agree with you but I would like it if you could give some examples of what you consider as a showcase of good writing in the current version. I'm not asking to argue with you, I'd just like to focus on these things and analyze them more carefully.
