Originally Posted by wildelight
The scene with the snake should you fail the dice roll is fantastic and has its intended emotional impact (well done, seriously).


If the intended emotional impact is "Refugee good, racism bad" then congratulations on falling into an feelings trap, I suppose.


Originally Posted by Callimachus
The killing of Arabella was well done because Kagha was portrayed as a corrupt and evil individual (which is why her repentence seems a bit too easy, for my taste), But Halsin's slaughter of the goblin kids is presented in a very different way.


That's because you are meant to care for the Tieflings and the writer sort of forgot to communicate that to the people in charge of the goblin story. There is even a goblin child "mourning" the loss of its parents that says they must have been weaklings if they died to REALLY hammer home to suffer not the greenskin.