Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery. A lot of the choices were about undermining authority, which seems to have worked, so I'm happy about it. I'll probably do things differently next time - this came out a little bland for me.
I think the horniness is here to stay now that graphics have reached real-doll levels. It's getting to that weird hyperreal stage.
As for YA writing, that's a good point. I don't really need ridiculous writing, just intelligent, and I think there's intelligent YA writing (at least I remember some like that, who knows!). Out of the "renaissance," I liked the writing in Tyranny quite a bit, which was a lot less high-concept than Disco Elysium, and often trashy in a fun way.
