That is an extremely in-depth and exhaustive novel concerning this one little bit of game... That said having read the whole thing I cannot agree more.
Unfortunately I have very little to add or discuss save for a brief description of how this feels on the whole.

Having a reasonable degree of "experience" and having also seen a fair bit of- let's call it "adult content" I can safely say that this feels like a confused hybrid of public television sex and cut-rate porn sex.
With a lot of angles having that "we'll show what's going on without showing what's going on" feel that you see in public television and high end movies trying to avoid an X rating.
As well as seeing just enough cut-rate porn clichés such as the "good girl blowjob" and those god awful facial expressions that all just left me feeling like I just watched something very cheap and dirty. Not even the good kind of dirty either.

Mechanical and anatomical issues aside (though they are pretty bad and the fact that my character has no balls whatsoever in a very literal sense makes this sting just a bit more.....particularly after recalling that goblin commenting on the pair he has on him.) this whole thing comes after a particularly difficult bit of game where you need to do some severely twisted things to even get there like some sort red blazing light at the end of the tunnel as a reminder that "oh yeah, you are definitely going to hell" .

Though I do wonder as to how any other such scenes will be handled after watching, this.

Will they be better? worse? And will anything actually change? Because in the end we're a bunch of nerds nitpicking about sex in a videogame...
Personally I like the game and would like to see it do better but ultimately that's really not in my hands


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