Lol the wrting has to be realistic. The NPCS are just not real enough for me and the wrting is to woke,eg to politically correct.
Also the story isnt immersive ............at all............regardless of my other takes i am being genuine here
Can you link the scenes you are talking about? "Woke" is one of those politically and emotionally loaded terms that means vastly different things to different people. Can you explain what that means to you?
I would separate "woke" and "politically correct" - as political correctness has a very different connotation - some people see it as overzealous censorship which is a valid point, and some see it as an attempt to reform language to remove structural inequalities.
But mainly I have no idea what you mean by these scenes if we can't all see them.