This to me is the perfect feedback, both in content and in how it is presented. It should be a template on how to give feedback and how to make good points with examples.
The only thing I disagree with is that he keeps saying "I don't want to make things harder in the game". I totally want to make things harder in the game for people. Like Dark Souls, Cuphead or Vanilla Naxx level of difficulty. The tears of frustrated gamers is a culinary delicacy.