Ok, here is my 2 cent on the new author thing.

Lewis, i'm willing to give you a second chance to enter the story. I know i dont speak for the whole group, but i'm willing to put my "behind" on the [nocando].

I think you've chanced you're behaviour on this forum in a good way, i mean the things you write are more on the topic and add something. I also read you're parts of the stroy on the other forum (devotion) and i think there quite good. You have "talent" (i dont know how to put it otherwise).

But for the char you were proposing here, i laked a bit depth. Also if i read you "test" post, you're char was a bit too 'strong'. With only two persons beat a group of 20 orcs, it is a bit overpowered.

Also you would need to put some thought in what the char will add to the story and the group. (new quest, romances, ...)

@ all authors.

I think we mind have judged a bit too soon on him. I know i'm asking alot here, but can we give him another chance?
I know it sounds like i'm begging in his place, but i think he's worth it.
Well i guess i'm 'defending' the weak as a paladin should <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/biggrin.gif" alt="" />
I would appriciate some thought of you guys/girls too

Greetz Jolie the paladin on a new crusade.

Joliekiller, paladin on a crusade against (almost) all evil.