Like i said, what will your char contribute too the story and the group. How you see your char evolving in the story. Like you were 'forced' to help them fe. Also make sure your char isnt to powerfull.
Like your sword (kills if toutches) is a bit too powerfull imo. Maybe it has a certain percentage of doing that like 5% chance to kill at once or so. Those orcs under your command, is not a bad idea it just seems like your somekind of god (again too powerfull). Keep that in mind when you write. It will help alot.
Jolie. Paladin on a new crusade.
Joliekiller, paladin on a crusade against (almost) all evil.
