Something i just thought of. If your going to be a member of that clan, i dont see your char stay long in the story.
Think of something or someway to extend your char so it can keep going after we solve "the black ring member quest".
Also keep in mind that, as your char is now, you are a man of 'power' and we dont really like that (at least i dont <img src="/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/badsmile2.gif" alt="" />, unless it is used for good).
Maybe a little hint: try to be yourself in the story. I mean make your char very mutch like yourself. You can have some things that are not 'You', but most of it should be you. It is easier to write and to make a contibution to the story. At least thats what i do. It makes it easier to write and to imagine the story.
I hope it helps a bit.
Joliekiller, paladin on a crusade against (almost) all evil.
