Sorry! I TRY to be concise, really I do!
I'm BAD at it though..... I value the attempt at full clarity more than concise wording, just at a personal level, so I always end up filling out more and more details, and sub-clauses and extra explanations and so on...
Also, sources here indicate that I'm spending too much time and energy on this topic already and I should back off from it anyway - I'm trying to take better care of myself, not exhaust myself further on long discussions that, while interesting and enjoyable in their own way, aren't really going to achieve very much productive in the long run, beyond what we've already chatted about, I think... It'd be nice if all this got taken under advisement but even if it did, it wouldn't be taken on as more than a few bullet points about ideas related to particular player opinions... So... we've probably done as much as we can in that regard...