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"Was denn?" sounds too aggressive and ungrateful in this context (after his liberation from the Duergar). Better is: "Was nun?" (in the sense of what happens now).


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Consistency: "Rothé-Ältester" and "Rothé-Kuh".


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All the dead Deep Gnomes whose bodies are to be thrown into the water by the Duergar have placeholder portraits...