I have less problem with the style but with the content. I know not many people read ingame books, but iterresting Lorbooks that have twitter (sorreh X) length are a bit disappointing - for example the book in the Owlbearcave about the conflict between Shar and Selune - I'd even like it if there was an "audio book" option (maybe at the long rest camp site) where you could just listen to it ...
