A few extra lines of explanatory dialogue might help. He says his heart isn't easily moved (seems legit, given it takes 2/3 of the game and saving everything dear to him for the romance to start), but almost in the same breath talks about his many past lovers. Did they all also move his heart? Does the protagonist stand out from the crowd in any way at all? How long is it likely to be before someone else moves his heart and he's off?

An option to stay together at the end would really help too. It almost feels like he doesn't actually want us around anymore. disagree