I actually liked it. I thought it was powerful,
and (at least for me) it needed to be someone like Alfira. To make me feel it more. A nobody is a nobody, but Alfira was someone I met. I had an opportunity to see her brightness and longing to create. To be responsible for that death, even albeit uncontrollably, it left me with enough emotion to get in character.
I wouldn't want it done any other way.
