One thing that bothers me early on is that this gigantic alien ship that crashed extremely close by, and yet people seem to have a very muted reaction to it. Like neither the tieflings or the druids seem all that impressed (granted they do have other things to worry about.) But even the looters in the area are just like, "Oh yeah we're gonna loot that ship." Why would you even call it a ship....? To you, ships are wooden things that sail on rivers. Wouldnt you be simultaneously curious and mind-blown by the nautiloid?

Another little thing: I usually dont mind SOME anachronisms, but at some point Mizora has a line referring to "giving you a gold star" or something to that effect. Gold star, as in gold star stickers. Unless "giving a gold star" had some pre-modern definition that didn't refer to stickers.