It's ok - it's doggerel - badly expressed, overuses certain words, the meaning doesn't flow particularly well but if a 4 year old wrote this I would give them a gold star and a hot cocoa!
Reign twice in the last sentence, is really bad. The more I read it the worse it gets. Do better ChatGPT!
Last edited by Blackheifer; 09/10/23 07:56 PM.
