Changes I would make for Halsin overall:

1) Either cut the
SA in the Underdark
comments or rewrite to be less
like SA was fun and have him engage with Tav/Asterion about recovery.
. Easiest would be to just cut it, but helping Astarion would really bring his tone in Act 3 from horny bear to something more akin to Act 1/2.

2) Give him something to do in Act 3 other than complain about the city. A mini quest to rescue the dying tree or aid a group of refugees, perhaps.

3) Remove any sexual comments toward other relationships or inviting himself along to the
drow twins
if he has been turned down already.

4) I personally think it is in character for him not to assume Tav would change their life to accompany him. However Tav should have the option to ask. If for some reason approval has dropped too low, give Halsin the agency to say no. After all Tav already can ask
if they have turned into a mindflayer.
I would guess players who prioritize happy endings would never see that content.

Just cutting the objectionable content and one more small dialogue tree would go a long way to cleaning up the tone. IMO.

Last edited by Asri; 26/10/23 04:18 PM.