I have no idea what the career path for a video game writer is (though there does seem to be info on the internet, eg at
https://www.gameindustrycareerguide.com/what-does-a-video-game-writer-do/).
But I seriously hope you are not actually considering paying people to look at your work. I would say that anyone who would agree to review writing on that basis is likely to be crooked and should be avoided like the plague.
All the best for your future.
When option A does not work after too many attempts, you have to try option B.
I also considered different approaches, like moving to the country where office is, going to the offine, taking hostage by using a toy gun and demanding a 20 minutes of attention to present my work. But since i know that others usually react to things differently, as always i went on forums and asked, and turns out that for some reason people would not hire someone who did this, even if gun were a toy and no harm were ever possible.
So if i 1) Don't have nessesary connections for someone to ask for me 2) Don't have communication skills to convince people to look at my works 3) Can't use pseudo-violence to achieve this goal - paying money is the only other option i could think of. If someone will have better ideas, i would be glad to listen.
