I liked the epilogue!

I would like things earlier in the romance updated as well, though. If Tav is romancing Halsin only, I wish they would revise the line where he says he only wants Tav, but he wants Tav to sleep with other people. That is a really strange and unromantic thing to say if Tav isn’t already in a relationship with anyone else. Instead he could say he only wants Tav, and ask what Tav wants (instead of telling her to sleep with other people).