Thank you, my thoughts exactly on everything you said.
You're welcome.

I also quite like the bed in the woods as it is, though I admit that version of the romance is very short if you didn't allow Gale to take you to Waterdeep before.
Nicely done as an intro scene, but sadly there is no follow up. Showing the two characters naked with a slow pan shot can do wonders, and you don't even have to animate much, if at all.
I only ever watched videos of Wyll's romance so I might be wrong, but isn't his position that he wants to wait until they are married? So it fades to black because nothing happens?
No, I think there is just no animation. Wyll wants to take it slow; I don't recall the dialogue details, but some implied that eventually he and the protagonist do have sex.
Mizora's dialogue also suggesting that they know each other well.
Edit: Typo